rab8bit



Open for any suggestions to improve this animation.
Also, ask if you need a spine file.
Thank you!
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Liutke

Glow effects or in this case a bit more! :)
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rab8bit

Liutke wrote:Thank you for a quick response.
Yeah, light effects will add in particle editor.
I need an opinion about animation, what I have done wrong or what can be done better.
Thank you!
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Harald

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The animation looks nice overall!

At closer look I would say that the side-facing parts (the red parts in the image below) move too far left and right, since from shading they appear to be at a 45 degree angle but move in and out as if they were at flat 0 degrees when viewed more from the front and 30 degrees when viewed partly from the side.

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Sorry to add that as well: In terms of glow you could also add a camera bloom effect instead of / in addition to particles.
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Harald

Better, but I would say the parts move too far 'inward' still. The bottom right part of the ones I marked red is the most obvious one. But getting there!
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rab8bit

I think this is the final version.
Harald wrote:Better, but I would say the parts move too far 'inward' still. The bottom right part of the ones I marked red is the most obvious one. But getting there!
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mfedorov

still to mecanic )) should be smooth! one side down and slow up, then second. Btw nice work!
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