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Archer. Beautiful and dangerous :)

https://www.behance.net/Akseley
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Mario

Wow, gorgeous!
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Nate

Really nice art and animations! I would say she could use some more facial expressions though, she looks a bit bored, like the girl from Parks and Recreation.
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Thank you. You are right. I was busy the overall animation and forgot about emotions. Will correct in the near future.
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Erika

She's beautiful but I feel like she's a bit stiff in her secondary animations. I appreciate how you added that little 3D effets to her, but it's like she's a marionette rather than really breathing and moving (: amazing work though on the illustration side!
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Søren

I'm having some serious issues with YouTube right now (on my phone). So I can't watch the video. But I'll give you some different critique instead. The character looks really great, but I think she would benefit a lot from a different hairstyle. Maybe a cool wild ponytail.
It would really help with the silhouette of her.
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Erikari wrote:She's beautiful but I feel like she's a bit stiff in her secondary animations. I appreciate how you added that little 3D effets to her, but it's like she's a marionette rather than really breathing and moving (: amazing work though on the illustration side!
Thanks for the feedback. A very difficult task to animate a beautiful girl + in a realistic style (I mean the correct proportions) Any inaccuracy immediately noticeable. You, as a girl, especially visible all the flaws. Well, it is impossible to learn without mistakes, I will work more diligently :)
Shiu wrote:I'm having some serious issues with YouTube right now (on my phone). So I can't watch the video. But I'll give you some different critique instead. The character looks really great, but I think she would benefit a lot from a different hairstyle. Maybe a cool wild ponytail.
It would really help with the silhouette of her.
I draw different hairstyles (in the sketch, only one survived). I wanted her eyes looking from the shadows... or wear a hood or come up with something with hair. For the animation looks spectacular flowing hair, for this stopped on this variant

here's another option, which has been preserved:
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Søren

Looks cool.
Could give her a hood for the shadow on her eyes and a hole in the back where her hair can flow out.

By the way. It's your creation and I love it. Just critique :)
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Thanks for the criticism. :)
Of course, maybe you're right. I worked too long with this character, accustomed, and do not notice errors. Need take a break and return to it later in a few days

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Maybe someone needs this character:
https://www.assetstore.unity3d.com/en/#!/content/74015
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jeffreynuez

Nice work. You've made some pretty great characters and I was hoping to know if you make decent money from selling your characters in the unity's asset store.
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